It's interesting, and a cool story with a lot of intrigue, but it felt like I was waiting forever for the game to actually start. First came the arrows, but two of them lead to immediate dead ends, so it wasn't really a choice at all. Then when it came to the minigame, it counted my left click to start as the wrong hand to start so it dumped me into the bad ending, which was a real bummer (and when I tried to restart to try again I couldn't move the mouse to proceed). There were a lot of typos in the story as well which kinda killed the mood at times. I think the story had some cool ambience to it so I think there could be some great things in store for future projects.