Quite the wacky game, though maybe it's a bit too wacky for me, haha!
It definitely was quite the experience: game certainly went to a lot of strange places with some very charming art, characters and scenarios. While a lot of the humor and dialogue were very non-sequitor, fourth-wall breaking and just total nonsense at times, part of me took it in stride and just enjoyed the crazy ride. Indeed, I found if you just turn off your brain and embrace these nutjobs, you can have a good ol' time.
But the other side of me felt like the game was just being a little TOO wacky to the point of just being confusing, inconsistent, and dumb. During my Eva run, the characters would flip-flop their personalities constantly, going from showing dominance to suddenly being nice or scared or whatever, and it made it so I could never get a read on them or treat it seriously. For example, my character would suddenly act like they know Eva even though it's their first time meeting, and suddenly Eva would be scared when I ask about her wings despite her being in charge for the whole time. Also there was a severe limitation of choices: in the Eva run you only get one choice for your job, with one leading to a bad end with no real reason for it and completely out of your control in an unsatisfying way. I was also annoyed that the game, when I was trying to read the text for the Pizza Ending, proceeded without my consent to the next screen before I was done. Finally, I don't think it's necessarily to have so many *emotional cue* text when you could just do that by changing the character art/portraits instead (which you already did most of the time).
Apart from that, the game also has clunkiness in other respects: the main menu, for example, has the main options remain even when you click on About or Help, leading to those same options blocking the text from being read. The text in those About/Help menus also gets cut-off in many places, and the scroll bar requires you to click next to it instead of on it to operate it.
Looking forward to seeing the full version!